Sep
04

55 Flash Fiction Friday: Secrets

It leaves no marks so no one sees the abuse. It’s all in her head and no one can know. She was happy to know secrets from an adult. It made her feel important to be worthy of such information. Soon it became too much and tore her up inside as the manipulation became apparent.

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6 Responses to “55 Flash Fiction Friday: Secrets”

  1. Comment by smarmoofus
    September 4th, 2008 at 10:35pm

    I don’t know how you survived. Seriously. If you’d had siblings, at least then you might have had an ally.

    smarmoofuss latest blog post… 55 Flash Fiction: Defining Friends, part 2

  2. Comment by Susan Anderson
    September 5th, 2008 at 4:05am

    Very powerful and well written piece. Worthy of publication.

  3. Comment by mona
    September 6th, 2008 at 9:47pm

    that is an intense 55ve Erica! Very well written!

    monas latest blog post… Friday Flash 55 Fiction : Paper Boat

  4. Comment by G-Man
    September 7th, 2008 at 8:38am

    Erica….This was a masterful piece of writing!!
    Better late than never, and you did get it in on time as far as I’m concerned…
    Thanks for the heads up, and I hope to see you this next week!
    Thanks again for playing….Galen

  5. Comment by Erica
    September 7th, 2008 at 9:09pm

    smarmoofus - I’m just too stubborn. An ally would have been nice though.

  6. Comment by Erica
    September 7th, 2008 at 9:10pm

    Susan Anderson, mona, G-Man - Thank you ;-)


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